Third Draft Finished

I finished my third draft.  I found a few problems which still need worked on, some consistency issues, and a few things I don't like.  Overall, though, I'm pretty pleased.  I've got a skeleton in place, and I've put a bunch of muscle on it.  

Sorry, I'm thinking about Rocky Horror and I can't get the "In Just Seven Days, I can Build Make You a Man" song out of my brain.